Here's the pitch for the first novel I ever finished! It still doesn't have a title and it's still not completely edited, but every book needs a back-cover blurb to show around. =D And I actually wrote this one - not Jamie. ;)
Though a matter of immense importance, what to wear to
dinner is one of the last things on eighteen-year-old Jocelyn Harrington’s
mind.
Growing up as a privileged young lady in the sleepy
countryside of Derbyshire, England, her life should be as untroubled and
tranquil as an afternoon tea. But circumstances, like the gossip that flies
through the air, can be deceiving.
With a twin brother missing since the tragic accident that
took her parents; a beloved grandmother whose illness is slowly taking her
life; a handsome Yankee with a shadowed past catching her eye; a self-indulgent
cousin chasing her affections; and a tyrannical aunt ruling her future, Jocelyn’s
life is as tangled as the threads in her spool-box. A predicament the independently-minded
Victorian miss is determined to change.
Armed with nothing but a crumpled label, a faded daguerreotype,
and a fantastic story, Jocelyn takes her destiny to the heart of London, where
she uncovers a stubborn and strangely distant brother; a spirited red-head with
a faith as fiery as her hair; a romantic mess; and unexpected joy and heartache. But when the future she has planned for herself takes an unexpected turn, will headstrong, self-reliant Jocelyn turn her back or reach
out her hands to the God who has never stopped pursuing her heart?
Till next time!
This is really good! I only write small things.... ;o)
ReplyDelete~Madeline
Sounds wonderful!! :)
ReplyDeleteThis is very well-written...but don't you think you're giving away an awful lot of the plot?
ReplyDeleteThanks guys! :D I'm incredibly excited about it!!
ReplyDeleteI probably am (you know me!), but I highly doubt this will be the finished product. Any suggestions you would make would be dearly welcome (as usual)! :)